📚 Story Pitch: ABANDONED
Tag line: When innocence is betrayed, vengeance is born.
Short Summary:
On a storm-lashed night, a newborn is left on the cold stone steps of a Saint Brigid’s Nunnery, a place that promises sanctuary but harbours dark secrets. The sisters take him in, christen him Frederick, and raise him under the iron rule of divine discipline. But behind closed doors, the nunnery is a house of horrors: neglect, cruelty, and twisted punishments scar Frederick’s childhood.
Years later, Frederick, now a mature man, on the surface a brilliant businessman and billionaire carries the deep wounds of betrayal. Consumed by haunting memories and driven by a thirst for justice twisted into something darker, he returns to the nunnery, not as the abandoned boy they tormented, but as a harbinger of their reckoning.
Why authors will love to finish this novel:
- It sets up a gothic psychological thriller ripe with chilling atmosphere, moral ambiguity, and layered characters.
- The story can explore revenge, guilt, madness, and even supernatural undertones if the author wishes.
- A haunting backstory already built in, all it needs is an author’s unique vision to lead Frederick down a path of redemption, destruction, or something even more unexpected.
- Perfect for fans of dark historical fiction, horror, or psychological thrillers.
Starter package includes:
✔️ First gripping chapter that introduces the nunnery, Frederick’s cruel upbringing, and eerie hints of his disturbed mind.
✔️ Introduction to the characters and setting descriptions to guide the rest of the book.
✔️ Yours to adapt, expand, and finish into a complete novel to sell under your name.
Price: £49.99
